Hanakamaru Arima Newbie
Number of posts : 6 Age : 30 Location : In your closet, touching myself to a voice in my head..XD Registration date : 2009-05-24
| Subject: Zekhana Hiruki ~nature freak~ Tue Aug 11, 2009 8:35 am | |
| Hiruki, Zekhana
Name: Zekhana Hiruki
Nickname: Zek, Hana, Kiki
Gender: Female.....duh!
Sexuality:Straight
Body Type: slim but strong, busty a bit....
General Appearance: I have one blue eye and one black eye. My light pink hair is sadly natural. My skin is a pale white, almost like a vampire. I always have my white shirt with one strap and one sleeve on. It has a picture of a broken heart on it. It was a heart that was once red, but hurt so much it went black. I have small hands, very petite and small feet.
Personality: Strange, funny. Can get into mischief with ease...and not even know. I get along with people with ease....but you get on my bad side, mess with my friends or my lover, your gone. Bye bye^^
Other: I love eating....
Age: 15
Village: Leaf
Rank: Genin
Height: 5'1"
Weight: 100 flat
~Bio~ I was born in a small shack in the middle of a forest in the leaf village. My father was an alcoholic and abused me and my mother. My mother just put up with it, then when i was 8, she went along with him. They were always talking about me, blaming me for things i didn't even know about.
So one day, my dad took it a bit to far. He touched me the wrong way, my mom laughed and i grabbed the katana. With one fluid motion, i beheaded both my parents and cleaned the blade. I kept it as my memory of the greatest achievement I have ever done. By age nine, i learned to do everything that a normal adult would need to do to live.
Now, at age 15, I can use a katana twice as good as any other 15 year old in the leaf village. When not in use, my katana is in its petal form. When needed, I grab the petals, cup them in my hands and blow softly, then i close my hands and my katana is there. A light pink, almost the color of my hair.
Jutsu:
- Spoiler:
Hakke Rokujuyon Sho (Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms) Name: Hakke Rokujūyon Shō, literally "Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms" (a.k.a. "Divination Field: or Divine Sixty-Four Strikes" and "64 Hands of Hakke".) Type: Kekkei genkai, No rank, Offensive, Short range (0-5m)
[spoiler]A very advanced Gentle Fist Style technique, the user must be able to see the Chakra holes (tenketsu, "pressure points")) of the opponent and execute it with incredible dexterity and precision in order for it to be effective. In a series of two heavy strikes, followed by two more, followed by four, followed by eight, followed by sixteen, followed by a dazzling thirty-two consecutive pinpoint-precision strikes, this jutsu closes 64 of the 361 tenketsu of the opponent completely. The last of the sixty-four strikes appears to be a blow with the full, open hand, rather than the fingertips of the index and middle fingers. The end result is a victim with disrupted chakra flow, making it very problematic to stay standing up and impossible to execute jutsu, unless an alternate chakra source is available, which is exceedingly rare and has only been demonstrated thus far in people containing a Bijū (Tail Beast). This jutsu is passed down in the Hyūga main house, but it is theoretically possible to figure it out on one's own if one is talented and insightful enough to do so (Hyuuga Neji being the only known example). In the Anime Neji has developed an enhancement, Hakke Hyaku Nijūha shō ("Eight Trigrams One Hundred Twenty-Eight Palms"), which essentially means a doubled attack speed and doubled capability.
Bloodline:
Clan:
Likes: eating playing games winning fights (which will never happen, but i can dream) dancing singing being able to do anything someone else can do listening to music loudly swimming
Dislikes: drunk people country music having no music being cold loosing a fight not able to do something that someone else can do
Habits: always twirling my hair in my fingers always humming something quietly stealing others shirts and wearing them
Weaknesses: getting poked in the side having my hair tugged having any of my friends or my lover getting hurt diamonds flowers
Strengths: my katana swimming skateboards the colors black and pink hurting enemies
Fears: spiders raccoons cows
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Taimoshi Uchiha S-Rank
Number of posts : 407 Location : With his true family. Registration date : 2009-05-01
Ninja Stats Clan: Uchiha Ryo: $75,000 Ryo in the bank: $25,000
| Subject: Re: Zekhana Hiruki ~nature freak~ Tue Aug 11, 2009 3:11 pm | |
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- Fix your fears. (Ie. Don't say the same thing 3x.) I'm sure your character fears more than that. As your Biography said, you're all alone. No parents, and no Family to speak of.
- Insert your clan, and Bloodline. And add that information in your Biography if possible.
- Feel free to add more Jutsu since you're starting as a Genin. I believe you can have atleast (5) until becoming a Chunin.
- You're not good at anything besides Kenjutsu (Sword Skills)? If you meant to be a Hyuuga (Which I determined by the Hyuuga Technique in your Jutsu Spoiler), why not have Taijutsu strength?
That's all I see right now. =/ | |
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Taimoshi Uchiha S-Rank
Number of posts : 407 Location : With his true family. Registration date : 2009-05-01
Ninja Stats Clan: Uchiha Ryo: $75,000 Ryo in the bank: $25,000
| Subject: Re: Zekhana Hiruki ~nature freak~ Tue Aug 11, 2009 11:39 pm | |
| Insert Clan/Bloodline; Add Jutsus. | |
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Misuto Fuuma Jounin
Number of posts : 423 Registration date : 2009-08-11
Ninja Stats Clan: Ryo: $26,000 Ryo in the bank: $0
| Subject: Re: Zekhana Hiruki ~nature freak~ Mon Aug 17, 2009 8:27 am | |
| [BUMP] don't want the thread to die without being accepted first lol | |
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Konan - Angel of Death - Anbu Black OPs
Number of posts : 32 Age : 38 Registration date : 2009-07-19
| Subject: Re: Zekhana Hiruki ~nature freak~ Mon Aug 17, 2009 12:46 pm | |
| Approved, thanks for the bump | |
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