Rain forest,Gale go's for a hike.

After Gale's training in the village hidden in the sound.He then puts on Sasuke's old clothes and then heads towards the gate.While heading towards the gate he realized that he is being watched.But as a guy thats trying to change he pays no mind to it.He keeps walking out getting closer to the gate.He could smell and sense the death in the village.He looks to the left to see a little girl's body with no arms or legs.She was wearing a small green gress and On the side of her was a woman who's been sitting but had a green dress as well but blood was running down her leg and her fingers were chopped off.This happened about 3 weeks ago and no one cleaned it up because there were no Kage to inform them to do so.Then when he got to the gate.Then he turned around to see Kunai's flying at him at a fast rate.



Not having his Bloodline activated he was not use to being able to dodge kunai's like that.so he quickly slashed out a Lightning slash deflecting the Kunai's.Then he Stood ferm.And then though about saying something but then he saw a kunai with a explosive tag on it.He then turned around and this time while running lifted his feet up in the air while running.He was not completly in the forest but he was running pass trees fast and he could feel the diesire in his heart as he raced on His hair was moving pass his ears.Then Boom.The very large explosion was no qestoning it.There were someone after eaither him.Or Sasuke.it increase his speed as he see a large missing pathway and There's no way to get to the other side.He then after having a emotionly look on his face his face changed to a more stronger look.Then his chakra level went up.He then he was getting closer.And He began to place alot of chakra to his feet and then threw kunai with a tag on it at the end of the path.He then began thinking to himself.I will not fail....I have no fear I will face my darkness. He said to himself as he jumped far and then when it exploded the blast then push him forward.He then flickering to the ground.Had a look on his face as he looked back.Its time to keep moving.

*To many Then's where they shouldn't be but overall its a good post I'll show you in pm your errors

Gale then turned his body to the sound village.Only to see That a group of people were looking at Gale.Then he watched carefully as they try taunting him from the other side like they were trying something.The day was nice and bright the son was shining on everyone.Even those who wish not to have it.Then he didn't move a hair from his body and then a shadow began to move around Gale.He looks up and see a adnormal Looking creature flying around with a figure on it.Then he stared at it.Then The beast shot a fire ball at him while shurikens come at him from the figure on top of it.Then Gale ran up a tree and with good accurate thought he landed on the thing and found out it was a bird.And then Was right infront of the figure,the figure was a teenage girl.Then she tryed attacking and was kicked off the bird and into the gap that split the lands apart.Then there were a sheet of papper that said.Wanted Dead or Alive Gale Mato.And then the bird tryed to go down in the gap but Gale had got off in time.And then he began to walk towards the realm village.



as he was walking he smelt like the sound village and he did not like that smell.It made him seem like a criminal.He was no criminal.........or was he.Then he turned his head to the right to curse the village only to see the people on the other side summoning Very large vultures.And then Gale turned around and doing the same thing lifting his feet he began running again but got real deep into the forest so that they would not find him.After moving at a fast past he jumps on a log.Then he got on the side of a tree.Then looked up to see them circling the area.He then activated Akasatsu And then got Kunai's ready.Then he would run up the tree and gain more air and Using the Shurikens jutsu he was able to hit the summoner.And then land on the ground with perfect aim.After thinking that the enemy is now defeated he sense something else that didn't show itself.He realized he was alot closer to the hidden realm village so he keep walking.I'm getting closer.I can feel her.And No matter what....I'll always come for you" he thought as he was getting to the end of the middle of the forest.

*You tend to cut you sentences too short and mark capitalizations where there shouldn't be...I'll cover those in a pm too

Gale was getting bored as he was walkinf along the forest.He had no emotion on his face.He wondered on how that they knew that,The fact that that was Gale instead of Sasuke.Then he faceplams hisself after remembering what happened at the hokage office.Gale can't remember anything pass when Kina was revived.Before that its a blur.Then he could feel himself alot closer able to sense Sasuke's chakra.He was the one who took out Gale's data.He then sigh as he looked up as the sky.Then he began flickering from one tree to another trying to take his time.Then he was shoot at by arrows from a unknown enemy.Gale still could see them coming like they were just mire rocks.He then jumped on a tree and bounce off it to hit the ground.And then he saw a blury figure.Then he didn't want to fight so he tryed to flicker quickly to the village.



The figure quickly knocks him down with speed.Gale recovers.And then the figure pulled out 2 swords.He pulled out thinking that his grasscutter was very fast.And could get pass his defence.But as they clash swords. his attacks were easilys pushed back.He fough him for 3 minutes and was knocked to the tree.Angry that he might not make it in time.The god in him awaken.And he showes this new look.Then he face him again.in the end he slashed him all in his chest and shoulders and rips.Then he went back to his normal self and raced towards the village.He reach the top of the gates.Then the figure appeared behind him with scares all over his body in the air wanting to strike but is stopped by a genjutsu and then Gale finish him off and he falls.Then Gale move in to find Sasuke and Kina.