Choose Your Own Rp Style

Why be like everyone-else? You should be different when you R.P (Role-Play) Don't try and act like someone else, just be your character. Act as if you were them and walk inside their shoes. Talk like how they would. Do not constantly switch point of views from Narrator , First person, to 3rd person in a single topic ,unless your opening a header with a narration of a summary of what your characters been through so far, cutting the summary short with a ....Then following it up with the first person or 3rd person view.

For example an opening narration and header title for this would be

Sasuke and The Beast (Header)--> This is so the readers do not lose focus of what's taking place in the post and it keeps interest.

"Sasuke was about to face the toughest opponent he's ever faced off with out of his entire his entire history of foes. Would he have a chance in making it out of this match alive?...

-Cutting to first person I can see an enormous figure in front of me with veins buldging out of his left and right arms rushing towards me giving me little time to move...I can hear the crowd behind me doubting my chances.

-Narrator, 3rd person view- (Narrator) The audience screams in cheers for their champion as he seems to about to achieve a victorious blow on Sasuke Uchiha. (3rd person) "Sasuke's gonna get creamed, see how fast he's moving"

Finish with a first person post - I stop the entire body of the rampaging man as he approaches me with a giant sword thrusted down at me. The sword appears to be taller than myself and thick and denser than my own blade the Kusanagi, but he isn't putting enough force or pressure behind his weapon to stop me from blocking his hit or countering it.

(First person taking action) *Takes the Kusanagi and hits the tip of the incoming sword and presses against it to stop it as I appear to be smaller with a small blade compared to my opponent I am able to stop him with an equal force* (First person telling what the 3rd viewer can see) From where I'm standing the audience would see me and a beast standing in a dead lock with the tip of our swords holding us back from each other.


That's a good way to transistion views the demonstration below this post is a bad way to do so.

A mix of confusing views is this example

(1st person) I'm about run into the greatest challenge of all time. (Narrator) Sasuke saw a large totem pole he was supposed to climb while his teammates watched. (3rd person) Aw yeahh Sasuke climb that pole!!! We'll win this one for sure. (Narrator not 3rd person)Sasuke made it to the top of the pole. (First person not 3rd person)That was easy.... (3rd person)He made it?! All right!!!

See now you can barely keep up with who's talking about what all you can see is a bunch o f people speaking at once.

Npc Style: This Is for anyone in the area around your character that's just an A.I character made up out of your imagination. This is a sample from the Resident Evil Site Joe Inuzuka along with Kai aka Madara Uchiha, and I made while we were there. We interacted with NPC's while the site was still under development.

-Beginning Storyline

Train Conductor: They say bad things have happened in that small town up ahead. People have gone missing and no one cared to search for them. The day time can be so decieving as the townsfolk there will accept you as one of their own. By nightfalls your alone, there's no one you can trust at all. Trust me I've been there, I've seen people scream there last screams. -He lets off a twisted manaical laughter

Sports Jock Capt: They said the same thing about my last trip to St.Louis over springbreak. Come on guys this is just another tourist attraction, he's obviously trying to freak us out. *laughs*

Head-Cheerleader: C'mon on Jeff, don't be so meaan to the guy. *she leans in to kiss him* He's trying his best to spook us, and you just go and crush him like this, how mean.

Jeff: Ok, Celine sheesh...

Train Conductor: -He sulks away into the front of the train after getting everyone to board the the train. Mumbles " "...Humans, they are all alike, but that'll change soon enough"

(Ok in this example only NPC's - they don't necessarily have to be an important influence on your character's life or story, but a little suspense helps). The character Sports Jock Capt. name was mentioned so his name was revealed and his NPC post name changed into Jeff.

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Now These are real characters interacting with the NPC's, but they are entering with their own style and personality....

(My profile on the site, Sasuke Uchiha starring as) Billy Coen is seen with an officer accompanying him to the train as he's sentenced to go to the local county jail of Racoon City. Billy stares helplessly at the handcuffs, re-thinking his past crimes, and how've they landed him before, when he gazes at some familair faces nearby the area.

-Billy tries to engage in short coversation and reminisce with them, but is taken away into the back of the train He's seated next to a window, in which he can gaze at the green lush hills coveted in thick mist. Billy sighs taking a quick look at the officer who sits next to him. "How'd did I ever wind back up here again *catches flashbacks of near-death experiences as he over hears the conductor speaking noticing the tone in the man's voice and the shimmer of his eyes he re-calls a familair name in his thoughts* "...Wesker!"

The man sitting next to Billy license reads (Kai, Madara starring as )Chris Redfield of the Alpha team....

Now in this portion of the topic for the Billy I rp his part and for Chris Kai did his thing....now watch and observe...

Chris Redfield sits next to Billy,wondering on what got him in to this mess.He turns to Billy and takes a quick look at the handcuffs."How are those fitting you?"He lets out a little laughter and takes a look out the window,remembering about the past.

-A sudden flashback takes place in Chris's mind.Going back to the S.T.A.R.S Alpha team mission in the Arklay Mountains.When he witnessed the death of a fellow Alpha team member.-

The flashback ends and Chris turns towards Billy.

Kinda tight, Billy then explains that he'd got arrested for stealing someone's fighter jet to escape a bizzare mansion awhile back, and everythings caught back up to him. Apparently flying without a pilots license means you either stole something, or your a terrorist. Billy exclaims that he was given the plane, from someone that had helped him get away from the area...a young woman. However no one would take Billy's word for it, and instead sentenced him to a 90 day trial in Racoon City's police station.

*Billy catches flashbacks of meeting her on a train similar to this one and having to fight off some kinda twisted inhuman beast that terrorized the train while they were coming back from Racoon City.*

Can you seriously ease up on these cuffs for me ,because they are a little tight? *gives off a smug grin* -Billy at that moment shifted his attention to more people boarding the train- He could see all sorts of people and a suspicious crate and cargo items being moved to the back of the train's caboose from his pervivial vison outside his window.

What is that???

(enters Joe Inuzuka aka Kiba )Leon leans against a window one car up, lost in recolections of Racoon City.

(You always respond to what the last person questions you to keep the story flowing) he asked Billy how are the handcuffs fitting and billy responds kinda tight....

"I figured" Chris smiled and listened to Billy as he told him the reason for his arrest.Chris then reached into his pouch and took out small keys."Im going to untighten the cuffs.If you try anything stupid...." He placed the key into the Cuffs and took them off,fixing them."Oh,the crates.I dont know.No one tells me anything." He laughs at his own statement and places the cuffs on Billy,without locking them.Chris whispered to Billy."Dont try to escape now.Do it when we exit the train.And as for the crates,i have no idea what they are."

-A man walks over to Chris and taps him on the shoulder.He lowers his head down to Chris's ears and whispers.-

Chris nods and gets up from the seat."I have to go,seems like i have another post.My friend here will be taking care of you now." With that,Chris walked down the train and the man sat down beside Billy.

Billy sat down annoyed a bit, but felt relieved to have his handcuffs loosend a bit. Then almost from out of nowhere, a strange man walks down the ailse saying that he's a traveling merchant.The gleam of a nice looking handgun catches Billy's eyes. Billy feigns as if he must goto the restroom, the man sitting next to Billy says "not so fast". He follows Billy just as Billy had pre-planned already. The man follows Billy inside the room as Billy then sucker punches the man and and punches him hard in the stomach and then lastly finishes his combination with a roundhouse kick. The man drops to the floor unconcious as Billy picks him up setting him on a toilet seat leaving him in a upright position whistling as he takes the man's wallet and exits the restroom.

Billy then approaches the merchant asking how much for the shiny little trinkets he has there. Counting the sum of american funds in the wallet it totals to $100 dollars total. The merchant then list the prices off for his weapons.

Handguns- $35
Machinegun- $40
Shotgun-$50
Medical Bag- 3x First aid Spray- $40
Bullets/Ammunition per Clip, Round -$10
Upgrades-Varies on Weapon
Combat Knife- free with the purchase of your first gun, if lost it'll cost $15

Chris had returned from his post to see the two seats empty."What,where'd they go....oh no." Chris had looked around walking down the ailse.He stopped and turned towards the bathroom."Of course." Chris walked towards the bathroom,opening the door with caution.He checks every toilet seat,finding the man he left with Billy sitting on one of them."Damm." Chris ran out of the restroom,setting eyes on the merchant and billy."Hey!"He walked towards Billy and the merchant.

-Nearby security officers started to walk over to the merchant and Billy.Each one of them pulling out pepper spray.-

Billy purchases a handgun, 1 spare pack of bullets, a med bag, and gains a free combat knife as the officers approached him drawing their pepper spray cans. "Hey!"...

"....Damn, they've noticed I've already gone missing this fast?! Billy takes his purchased items left with 15 dollars only, pocketing it. As the first couple guards walked towards Billy smiling from both the front and back. Billy lashes his loosened handcuffs into the guy behind him's face. Then swung a quick right jab across the man in front. Billy ducks after suspecting an attack from the back allowing the guy in front to recieve yet another attack from his own partner. -People are shocked and amazed to see someone fighting the guards and turn there heads to look-

Jeff: Give em the left, and then finishes it with an uppercut!!

Celine: Go Mister Go Mister Go!!! Give him a K.O

Billy see's Chris approaching in the distance as he makes a run for it towards the upstairs part of the train and under a table. "I'm not going back to jail no way not after what happened last time....-flashbacks-...,Rebecca I owe you one."

Chris notices Billy running up the stairs."Your not getting away!"He runs after Billy,shoving the Merchant aside.He reaches the second floor of the train and starts to search around.

-Many of the bystanders follow Chris up the stairs and start to watch.Including the two who were watching.-

Jeff: I am so getting this on camera.

Celine: Where did the guy go?I want to see some action.

Chris grabs a Walkee Talkee that was attached to his belt."Security!I need security on the second floor now!"Chris quickly straps the Walkee Talkee back onto his belt and searches for Billy.

Billy overhears the words security!!! coming from Chris as he's hidden under a table -Billy sprawls out across the floor crawling at an even faster pace hiding behind the counter of the upstairs bar.

..."Alright I got two choices, give up now or keep running"...Billy emerges from the bar's counter grabbing the bartender by the neck wavering his gun at several people. Okay, I'll come quietly only if you give into my demands okay?

Jeff: Holy Crap!!! He has a gun...where's my extra film!?!

Celine: *shrieks* Eek -hides behind Jeff...Get down!

-More security officers rush through the crowd of people,all of them holding Pepper Spray Cans.They stop and look at Billy.-


Chris holds out an arm."Stop!Wait!!" Chris walks towards Billy slowly."Ok,what ever you do...do not harm the bartender.She didn't do anything to you.Now,what are the demands you need?" Chris stops a couple of yards away from the Bar Counter.

Jeff: This is going on You-Tube.

Celine: Man,this guy is going to blow the train up.I've seen the movies!

I want freedom after my 90 day sentence...no more of this parole officer crap, and security escorting me everywhere I go. I confess those 23 innocent villagers that were killed wasn't my fault. My CO told me to eliminate them on site, because some pretty freaked out -the train's engine starts up interupting Billy-

Billy releases the woman from his grip as Chris had said.

-The bartender runs away from Billy and all of the Security Officers put their Pepper Spray Cans away.-

Chris nods."Ok,i will talk this over with the Judge in Racoon City.But for now,we are going to have to arrest you again." Security officers storm towards Billy and restrain him.One of the officers cuff Billy and walk him through the crowd of people.Chris follows."Make sure those cuffs aren't too tight." A man walks up to Chris.

Chief Ditzka: Mr.Redfield.You left your post for what reason?

Chris follows the Security Officers."I had to check something out."The chief walks beside Chris.

Chief Ditzka: That doesn't give you the right to leave your post.I should strip you of your power,but i'll give you one more chance.

Chris looks at Ditzka."It wont happen again sir."Ditzka walks away and Chris continues following the officers.

--Billy follows Chris back accompanied by him backdown to the first floor, and awaiting nightfalls. As the sun appears to be setting already and the train heads for a dark tunnel. Billy closes his eyes and reminisces on how the old Racoon City used to be. As they progress forward out of the hills of the Arklay Region Billy begins to feel a bit uneasy about what he'd seen earlier.

Billy begans to wonder, what was stored in the back as the back of the train in almost an instant rocks a bit and Celine's voice is heard screaming out Jeefff!!!

Billy chuckles thinking those two kids had run off and went to make out some where.

Jeff goes searching for Celine as he then see's something like a frozen body placed in the back of the train...Oh this is friccken Sa-weet a fake body it looks so real though *he takes pictures as eyes glow in the back of the room and growls are heard*...So they are already trying to scare us huh?

...Jeff takes his camara flashing the focus on the eyes behind him after he hears the growls. *click* *click* The monsters retreat for a second from the flash allowing the two to get away, as Celine seems frightened once they return to the main car of the train.

Chris walks up to a seat and sits."Finally,i could get some rest." He begins to doze off and falls asleep.

-Celine and Jeff stroll through the aisle,causing commotion and waking Chris.-

Celine: What do you think it was?

Jeff: What ever it was..i have it on camera.

Chris opens one eye,hearing what the two were talking about."What did you exactly get?"

Jeff: I dont know,we are going to check it out now.

Celine: Yea.

(Kai uses NPC's to have a full 3rd person NPC conversation -he just had fun using the NPC persona's period)

Billy looks outside his window as a large tunnel comes into view-

As the train approaches a dark tunnel, gurgling sounds and screams are heard coming from the back. Some of the passengers appear to have come up missing as the emergency lights cut on inside the train in order to keep the passengers out of the dark. Blood stains of dragged away victims lead to a door in the far back as the train comes to a screeching halt at its destination Racoon city. the back emergency doors of the train are torn off the hinges and the creature has escaped into the shadows.

The driver seems to have teleported or just gone missing, leaving information in spaniard language...

-The city is clearly full of townsfolk, they appear quite normal. Several officers await Chis and Billy to guide him off to the police station.

-The train is still explorable (This was an OCC: (Out of character post to tell the players or readers that they may go back through this place and rp)

Jeff toys with the camera,searching for the picture.He finds it and then hands the camera over to Chris.-

Jeff: Here,take a look at that.

Celine: Its scary.

Chris takes the camera and stares at the screen.He stares into the camera with a pale face.Memories were coming back to Chris."It...it can't be."He gets up from his seat and walks over to Billy.When Chris reaches Billy,he gives him a tap on the shoulder,motioning him to get up right after."Come with me."Chris walks off towards the restroom.

(The story ends here) But it would have been my or Billy's post to continue the story...well that's all in a nut shell, just be creative)

xD Well Sasuke if you don't mind I want to put my own rp style o.o

For my point of veiw
When people are posting when they talk I usually give them there own color

- I usually have myself as red -
- Allies as a calm color (Blue, Green , Indigo, Violet Et' Cetra) -
- Enemies such as minions I put as Brown, And the leader of Enemies I put in Olive or other deep shady colors. -

Example: Skeleton: Ohehe well sonney... You have chosen a fate beyond this world... I've never in all Three thousand... Oh, Six thousand rusty ol' years of my life ever met a fool like yo' self. No body in my days would do said 'Hey lets go to hell!' No. We all were forced here by our sins... Now adays you youngagin's are begin to be stricken by sins!

Me: ... I am going for my sage trials... Where my path brings me... In dark places... I will keep moving for power. I killed a poor little boy just for his legendary eye. You say back in your day, But this is a new era... A era where no man lives without breaking a sin... Whats so great about god?! He is such a prankster... He says 'Don't cuss or insult' but he gave us a mouth... He told us not to check out girls... He gave us eyes and hormones... He said don't kill but he gave us a will and the hands! So what? I will do what I must... Because were all going to hell anyway.

Now when I rp I put '-'
- I try to start with some description, Then add some thought. For thoughts I use the color I use to speak, and italics. -

-I also like to atleast per section (Area before I talk or someone else does, Where I rp) Try to atleast do two paragraphs (5 sentences each paragraph, 10 words each sentence, And no using 'u' 'yo' or other slang you use in text xD)
Example:

-The boat was rowing, I heard crashing water as rocks were being weathered away, Tree's snapping and the sound of harsh wind You old coot... What are you planning to do? You defiantly don't trust me at all... Something is coming.. Though my chakra pores are useless here... The dead can't be detected by sensors... So... Maybe... Byakugan!! I though, Though releasing a technique. Veins began to pulse, This time without a mask the veins showed slightly on the wrapping. My eye vision began to blur slightly, I snapped my right eye shut to fix this.

My left eye opened wide, The boat began to thin out through the blackness as it formed, The entire boat was barely visible with my eye, As if it was soo weak in strength that I looked through it. My eyes struggled against the water, The waves crashing on the boat began to form as chakra lining, It was strange, This entire river was made of chakra, I enhanced my sight to extend a mile ahead, As it rapidly stretched out suddenly my eye was sent into a shock of pain. I didn't even get half way of a mile before it was too much, I definatly need to train more on it.

There was a explosion, I looked to the side Gahh my byakugan didn't see anything! There should of been a large mass of summoning or movement, Even in this massive chakra flow it should show!! I can't believe I over looked something so large.. Wait.. My pores are starting to tack onto it... This thing is alive, Not dead!! I though loudly, Glancing at the skeleton cackling away.-

(When I finished I left a opening for me to speak, or to acknowledge him about to speak to me. Because I didn't leave much of a entrance, I don't have a full blown conversation)

Me: You fucking bastard... You led me into a sea of Snakes!! I can see them rapidly forming!! This thing isn't a real snake... Is it? It's a Basilisk with the ability to reproduce itself. So.... Sasuke hired you, To set me up for Failure?

--- Side note ---
- For another beast or person, Unless I am tied into a duel against them I like to keep there movements in they're own paragraph, Because it isn't what I care for, I keep it shorter then my descriptions. -

Example for this:

-Suddenly a large snake, With massive horns like a rhino on its head shot toward the boat, I formed a seal and sighed And here we go! Water Release: Drowning Technique!! I thought, Leaping from the boat as its stretchy and slimey green skin reached across it, It turned and went to come at me, I landed on a large rock in the middle of the river.

Suddenly a whirlpool began to form under the one snake. This technique didn't just suck them under water, It was a sort of Reverse summon which took a sum of chakra. It screeched loud, The other snakes hissed and I knew they were signaling to each other. In a flash the head ducked under water, It was gone. The technique finished as a blast of water shot up. Hmm... I have ten minutes before I can use byakugan... When the ten minutes is up, I will be able to see the pressure point on the big snake making all the little ones... And I will make a serious move.

Skeleton: "Ohehehe Ol' Jamie gal is awaken! Get her girl! Rip him to shreds!!"

As the skeleton raised his hands, The water seemed to of frozen, Though still liquid. Somehow this old man was holding us still. This must be one of those test Sasuke mentioned. Would it be this hard, Each time? Well... I am looking foward to it. And with this blade, I will kill you all I raised my hand, Forming a seal as chakra formed, Slowly a seal formed in my palm. Some smoke rolled from the finger tips, A large butcher knife like blade was summoned. It had bright steel edges and the Kanji for "Death" (Shi) on it. I weilded the handle and grinned, It was time to cut up some meat.

A loud cackle was coming from the old man You laugh it up... But when I finish I will beat the shit out of you.. I though. A large snake emerged from the side, As I spun to slice it another formed behind me. My blade tagged against the snakes throat. Green juice squirted out, It must of been acid. My right hand yanked back as a hiss came out behind me, A seal formed in my palm for the Summoning: Multi-Shuriken Holder.

As chakra pushed out of the black handle, Multiple shuriken were summoned, And blasted foward into the water, Striking the snake continuously as blood began to dampen the river. Moist flows of blood also pumped out, It seemed tons of snakes were at the bottom and I was hitting them. Suddenly I remembered the other snake, My eyes darted to it. The snake was paralyzed, I had his the spinal rubber collum in the neck, Which is hard to find, What luck. I have seven minutes to go... This is going to be a pain in the ass!

I yanked the blade back, Allowing a down pour of blood to drip into the water. I spun around, Driving my heel against it's cheek like jaw. There was a snap, It's eyes creased more of a yellow tint. Purple poison dripped, It was obvious I broke its fang. The snake fell back into the water, Still Stunned. I had developed a brilliant way to attack a herd, But it also would drain chakra. But I had no other choice. In a flash I leaped into the air, My right hand held down, And my left holding the large knife straight out. Using chakra I pushed from the blade, A rotation twisted out of my body as I began to twist, Slowly getting faster and fast. I formed chakra in the holder, As I spun I began to release shuriken seals, Sending herds of Shuriken all around at first.

As I began to spin faster, Hundreds of shuriken were flying all around, Piercing snakes as hisses shot up, I wasn't even giving them the change to rise up. More and more blood splashed up, The large snake just watched, I knew it was planning something. The old man laughed louder, It seemed like his voice was just going to echo non stop through my head. Suddenly I hit the rock, I was snapped in pain as I just realized I was going down at the same time Gahh... Son of a bitch! Well... I have five minutes left... I thought.

My chakra pores were pulsing in the largest one, I couldn't sense any of the others now, They must of been dead.

Skeleton: Here it comes~

Suddenly the large one's mouth opened, There was a burst of red light as Flames began to explode from it-

Me: Holy shit!! Mizu Kawarimi, Suiton: Amesho!!!

-As the Kawarmi Substitution took effect, My body began to turn to liquid, My legs splashed apart as it flowed into the water, The bandaged fell off, My face sucking in as I help out my palm. Using this technique on the river was easy, Vapor began to surface through my palm as my right shoulder sunk down, Both my weapons turned to liquid as well. A burst of explosive power shot from my palm. A rain of powerful water shots exploded fourth, Striking the flames as they matched power, As the water burned away, The flames hit the rock, I was gone, Fused into the water slightly.

Two more minutes... One minute and Fifty Seven Seconds... The snake hissed as I though, My left eye formed under the boat, Slowly my entire body began to form as I floated up. My skeleton formed up the boat as the liquid rose, Clinging to it, Forming. The technique temporarily turned me to water.

One minute and Five seconds... I though as my body completely formed, Using chakra I channeled it to my feet so that I stood on the water surface. I raised my liquid forming hand, My right hand was already holding the holder, My left now formed with the Knife. I stood up, My left eye revealed.-

Me "One minute!"

I have my speech in bold, my thoughts in italics, my snakes in green, Haineko in violet and enemies in whatever colour suits them best.

I wouldn't think it inexperienced as much as his character is just more formal. If your character is that kinda upstart, jumpy, poppy person then of course they would speak slang alittle. It's all part of personalities and styles of rping.