A few poems i just wrote

And im currious what you all think. tell the truth!


"Love"

Love turns to Sorrow
In unexpected ways

Happyness to depression
with the simplest words

The strugle is daily
while some overcome

The anger inside me wins the battle
but depression wins the war

How i miss the days
when happiness always won

Now I just fear
What i have become


Written by ~ Andrew Mavredakis

"Rhyme"

I sit here all the time
thinking and writing
Should i try to rhyme?

I sit with my eye
closed to the world
wondering what woul you do if i die

Wandering quietly in the cold
freezing waiting for your tender touch
Over and over I've been told

You words cut deep
but you don't care
I just wait untill you sleep

Writen by ~ Andrew Mavredakis

These poems are not bad....I like the Rhyme one....That's what I do. Rhyme when writing a poem.