Inatzu ~God Of Lightning~

Subject: Inatzu ~God Of Lightning~ Thu Oct 22, 2009 4:20 pm

FANGLORD,Inatzu

Name: Inatzu Fanglord

Nickname: Ina

Gender: Male

Sexuality: Straight (Completely)

Body Type: Fit And Toned

General Appearance. Wearing my blood red hair long down my back, I sport my kage robes with pride. I perfer a simple red or blue kimono, but being Kage comes with annoyances. My hair is usually worn up and tied with a black cloth. Like always, the simpler the things I wear, the better and ore relaxed I feel.

As for my facial appearance, I look farely young. Younger then what I really am at least. My eyes tend to hold a gentle touch except for my enemies. With my enemies, they appear to drill into their soul and read them as if like a large print book. As for my eye color, a simple penetrating purplish-red.

Personality: At most times, like when around my villagers or when with people I acknowledge as friends, I am usually pretty happy and joyous. But when I'm lookied at or talked to in an improper way, I tend to get a little rougher. I can tend to glare and trash talk back and even go to punches with snot-nosed idiots. What can I say, I'm a walking bundle of fun and laughs (With an occassional hard punch thrown into the mix).

Elements: Lightning, Wind, Water

Other: Inatzu also contains a high amount of what doctors call Highly Active Electrolites. These give Inatzu a unique trait, this trait consists of his ability to absorb and conduct lightning. He is pretty much a living lightning rod. This ability also allows Inatzu to absorb the chakra in the lightning he's struck with as well. The other thing that needs to be explained, is Inatzus body. As explained in my Bio, Inatzu used to be the one and only Surpentheon. But after being killed, he was resurrected into a man-made body forged from the elements. So, in lamens terms, Inatzu is a living puppet and he is his own puppeteer.

Age: 25

Village: Hidden Oni Village

Rank: S-Rank/Kage

Height: 6'2"

Weight: 185lbs.

~Bio~ (Look Below, 2nd Post)

Jutsu: (Look Below, 3rd Post)

Bloodline: N/A

Clan: N/A

Likes: Swords, Dragons, Lightning, Women, and Developing Jutsus

Dislikes: Long-Range weapons, Cheaters, Snot-Nosed Children, Whiney Babies, and Being Single

Habits: Over-Estimates Himself, Uses Lightning A Lot, and Flirty

Weaknesses: Can't Swim, Friends, Hot Women, Godmodding, and Sake

Strengths: Swordplay, Lightning, Hand-To-Hand, Immune to Genjutsu, and Drinking

Fears: Losing Those I Care For, Dying, and Myself

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Subject: Re: Inatzu ~God Of Lightning~ Thu Oct 22, 2009 4:41 pm

~Bio~

(This Bio starts as another person but will eventually tie in.)

Growing up in a hidden village in the mountains, one not of power but small and secret, his parents, sister, and him grew up with little violence. But even though they were hidden from the wars and hardships of battle, the village still retained its traditions. Young Surpentheon was not exempt from these traditions.

In Surpentheons small hidden village, the right to passage and ascension to man-hood was marked by his completion of learning their families jutsus. Fueled by his families pride and high statis, Surpent was pushed and trained rigorously. Though, Surpent showed an unusual knack for learning jutsu. Cunning intelligence and quick reflexes as well as an abnormally large chakra pool allowed him to exceed his families expectations. Succeeding in accomplishing all his families jutsu, Surpent reached the natural right of man-hood at the age of 7.

Looked upon as a great asset and thought to be a prodigy, he was watched and cared for rigorously. Due to this eccentric care, his twin sister Dragonia was usually forgotten. Yet, even though the village and even his family chose to overlook Dragonia, Surpent cared deeply for his other half. Since she was frail and constantly sick he would always try finding some way to cheer her up. He even trained her between illnesses. Surpent soon saw his twin sister as his Anchor to Sanity.

Surpent had found himself content with life as a prodigy. Besides studies, everyday life was peaceful. At least it was till the year of the famine. A lack of rain soon hit the small village hard. Water was becoming a scarce commodity. Crops were whithering and fires were becoming a frequent day to day thing. Unable to continue in secret, a group of council members set out to meet with the close yet distant Village Hidden in the Stars. The Council Members were hoping to strike a compremise and arrange for food and assistance in surviving the famine.

Upon the Council Members's return, Dragonia was ill once again and had just waken from a dream. The members of council had retired into a meeting with the other Council Members and when finally they resurfaced, the news they bore was news that would start the long path to the villages true demise.

Speaking to the people of the small village, the matriarch told them of their deal with the Tsukikage. The deal struck was that the small village would offer up several of their best ninja in which would journey back to Star and would there present for the Tsukikage to see, a demonstration of their combat abilities and jutsu usage. The Kage would then pick from the presenties, one person to join their village as an assassin. In turn, the Tsukikage would send supplies and money to the small village.

After hearing this, a slow hush fell over the vilagers soon followed by discussion and 3 men stepped forward. Among the 3 was none other then Surpentheon himself. Of course, his father disapproved, and being Village Leader tried to get the council to say no. But Surpent retorted and won the People and Council over. He was accepted as 1 of the 3.

At this time, Dragonia had forced her way through the crowd and grabbed Surpents' hand when he the other 2 went to leave. Turning to face her, she warned him. "If you do this, you'll never be the same. This journey *Cough* will change you." Nodding to her, he lays a gentle kiss to her cheek and continues to follow the others. That night, Surpent was chosen by the Tsukikage and instantly instated into the Midnight Assassins.

He served under the Star Village till he was 18. In this time, His Swordsmanship had reached master level and he had excelled in Medical Arts. This was apparent since he used his medical abilities to gain the Asahi Bloodline while in Star. After his several years of service, the Tsukikage and him had become close friends. Stars Kage granted Surpent temperary or if he chose perminent leave from the Village.

Moving back to his home village, his sister was right. Surpent was now troubled by nightmares and had obtained immense knowledge. He had developed an obsession with jutsu through this knowledge. Dragonia called it Addiction to Advanced Techniques. Surpent would hold experiments with jutsus trying to use his intellect and honed medical skills to develop new and more powerful jutsu. It was during one of these experiments that Surpent created the destruction of his home.

It was in the midst of a storm, in a flash of light, Surpents' village was up in flames. Surpent (Or so you'd think) stood amongst the rubble wielding a crimson light around his arm as Dragonia layed before him crying and bleeding.

Coming to his senses, Surpent yelled to the heavens in agony. It was a couple days later that Surpent was seen leaving the remains of his home carrying Dragonia on his back.

It was almost a year later till Surpent was seen again. He had settled into the Village Hidden in the Grass. But not only that, he had become a well known ninja and a respected Kage. The battles through his years as Kage ranged from raids to full out attacks by the Akatsuki. He remained Kage until he killed Hayataro (A.K.A.- Sage of Dragons) in order to claim the title for his own. The Gods and 3 sannin grew angry with this natural act of the shinobi and unofficially executed Surpent after stripping him of his taken title.

As a normal man would tell you, to live once is enough. But Surpents sister (The only survivor of the village disaster.) and others thought otherwise. Surpent had left a scroll behind in his sisters posession. A scroll containing a jutsu which made resurrecting someone possible. Dragonia gathered friends and allies of Surpents and weilding the Scroll of Nature (See Inventory) went to the ruins of Grass left by the Gods and together brought Surpent back to the living.

Taking on a new name for his new life, Inatzu wandered as a Rouge Ninja till he stumbled into the Uzu Village. He had no memory of his life a Surpentheon and was around the age of 15 then. Adopting their ways and customs, Inatzu soon gained back his old vigor for life and its wonders. At the passing of the Genin Exam, he swore he'd become greater still to be useful to the Kage Kina who gave him a home in Uzu. For the last year, he has trained rigorously to get stronger for his new home.

He stayed apart of Uzu for a short while only. While there, he found himself yearning for somewhere else. It wasn't till his mission to carry a message to the River Kage that he found a place he felt at home. He completed the mission for Uzukage Kina Fuuma and then saw Kilyal in secret about joining River. After a long talk, Kilyal accepted Inatzu and welcomed him to the village with the gift of his new headband.

But that was short lived as well. For Inatzu soon began to find his new Kage to be someone who he didn't want to take orders from. So, after secretly meeting and fighting an Akatsuki member, Inatzu joined their ranks for what he hoped would be excitement. Boy was he right about that.

Inatzu had been given a hunter who's job it was to track him down and kill him. Obviously, his former Kage was the one who put the hunter on his tail (Freaken Woosy). But, the hunter never even found let alone fought Inatzu. So Inatzu continued under the Akatsuki robe for a while, unhindered, except by my partner.

But as time went on, Akatsuki gradually fell apart and eventually disbanded. Upon his wanderings, after the disbandment, Inatzu stumbled upon an old abandoned village. He decided it was a good place for a man like him to make his home, and so, he began to build. And it slowly began to turn itself into a home.

So now, Inatzu has rebuilt the entire village and still stays busy on making it better. He was deemed Kage of the Village, known once again as Sunagakure ::Hidden Sand Village::, and is working hard to revive it to its former glory. But once again, it mustn't have been ment to be. For he soon left for a new village leaving Suna to Gaara. His new home as kage would be that of the ancient Oni village. But new and reborn in his image.

Subject: Re: Inatzu ~God Of Lightning~ Thu Oct 22, 2009 4:51 pm

~Jutsus~

Lightning Style:

Denkousochi- (C-Rank) A technique he developed while doing his sage trials. He uses his bodies natural ability to focus and condense lightning in his body. After condensing and focusing, he then releases it in the opposite direction he wishes to move. When released, it causes the user to be propelled at the same speed the lightning is released. This enables the user to move faster than even the flicker technique. The drawback is, the user can't make sharp turns while in the middle of using this technique. Straight lines to slight curved is all this tech allows. It's level of mastery is decided by level. As the more you master it, the more control and training is needed.

Lightning of the Plus Factor- (D-Rank) This is an electrical attack with mainly a positive charge. It is weilded in the hands and is used for piercing during taijutsu or long-range striking since it can be dislodged from the hands and shot. It's path can be disrupted by something giving off a negative feed/charge. When used with its opposite, the will be drawn to eachother. That includes any object struck by them.

Lightning of the Minus/Negative Factor- (D-Rank) Same as Lightning of the Plus Factor but is mainly a negative charge. Is harder to direct and control but can be steered easily if a positive charge is around. This causes it to seek out the positive for an explosive reunion, if you catch my drift. When used with its opposite, the will be drawn to eachother. That includes any object struck by them.

Chiidori- I call forth a ball of lightning to my hand. The sound it makes sounds like a Thousand Birds. It’s an assassin’s jutsu and is a powerful jab attack. (Rarely used. Learned in order to develope Roar of a Thousand Birds.)

Flash- (D-Rank) a genjutsu activated when I unsheath my sword. It creates a flash that I activate the genjutsu in. The Genjutsu is imprinted on the eye from the flash and this makes it harder to release. The opponent seems to still be in the real world but finds themself unable to beat the user of this jutsu by any means. I usually follow this jutsu with another to strike at them when their down.

Rip Charge- (S-Rank) Using electricity, rips a hole in space. This is done through the tearing of the natural seam of the world inhabited. By using a constant flow of powerful lightning, the user places his hands within an inch of eachother. One hand uses lightning of the negative charge, while the other hand is using a positive charge. These two battling charges being within that close proximity, causes them to naturally rip this hole in space. It's a common Phenomenon taken and made explainable in the worlds of ninjas. For if you take an element and gradually take it and its opposite and hold them so close that they are attempting to reach eachother to naturally cancel themselves out as nature intended. But the distance between them causes this attempt to be futile, the force applied between the two vriables will gradually result in this rip or tear as you will. (The size can vary) The hole can be used to absorb attacks or swallow massive objects. Inside the hole is a world of constant storms. Electricity is in no short amount there.

Counter Charge- (D to S-Rank) This jutsu is only able to be used with Lightning jutsu. This creates a long lasting bolt of lightning that has an amazing property. It is a bolt that changes its color to the color of the attack it goes up against. This change in color isn't really important as the ligtning is just made with extra plasma in it so it is more absorbant and pliable. The jutsus main purpose is to cancel an oncoming elemental ninjutsu. It's used strictly as a cancel move. Its consumption of chakra depends on its target. The stronger the target is that it attempts to cancel, the more chakra and power the lightning takes to use.

Roar of a Thousand Birds- (A-Rank) By creating lightning in both hands, the user then slams their two hands together. The hands collide starting at the palms making a V. This shape allows a path for the lightning to escape. When the hands/palms collide, the lightning connects and is freed in a radical pattern. It then shoots out the hands in a wave-like pattern. ( < o O ) This attack was developed and evolved after watching Chidori.

Lightning Dragon Flash- (C-Rank) similar to Dragon Flame Jutsu, this uses the same technique but utilizes the Lightning element for faster and more focused attack. This causes a blast of lightning to be emitted from the users’ mouth at speeds over 500 fps. The last image the opponents sees is a terrifying dragon about to consume them.

Tunnel Lightning- (A-Rank) by using chakra infused Electricity I can direct the flow of it through the ground as well as other solid objects and air.

Lightning Bomb- (B-Rank) I condense electricity I hold in my hand and coat it with hardened chakra which now allows it to be thrown. When thrown and it collides, the extra pressure causes the lightning to explode with added force and speed.

Lightning Bombardment- (S-Rank) The user summons supreme lightning of such large amounts that the entire field seems to explode. Afterwards, the area is filled with dust.

Hydro Lock- (C-Rank) The user expels a burst of static that covers the field and electrifies anything with water in it or on it. This acts as a solid defense for but a second and can be used to act as a targeting jutsu for other lightning moves.

Dance of Devastation- (S-Rank) The user takes a standing stance and raises their arm up infront of them. They then call forth so much chakra that it takes on a swirling, visable form around them. This chakra focuses on the arm/hand area. Then Lightning springs forth, beckoned by the user and launches out at speeds so fast even the mighty Sharingan and Byakugan can't keep up with the many lightning bolts. This inturn also makes it impossible for the user to keep track of the bolts as well. The strands launch themselves out at random, going into the air, forward, into the earth and all the while leaving a solid, heated, dangerous stream of itself behind where it has been. The finishing form of this jutsu is that of a giant web surrounding the user and the opponent. Once in it, it is impossible to get out even if your body could bend like a snake. This jutsu is meant to stab, ensnare and even dismember the users enemy. Because of its large area, ranging to that of over three football fields, and its random strikes, it's prctically impossible to get out of its way since the jutsu is finished in just over a second. It is also risky for the user since the random uncontrolable bolts can get into the 6 inch area of protection around the user by accident. Tis is usually followed by the justu Vanishing Web.

Vanishing Web- (A-Rank) Used in succession with Dance of Devastation. The user forms one handsign, the Dragon, and the web then implodescausing mass damage to the entire area and those within. The end result is a giant crater with just a small spire in its center where the user stands. Most likely cut from flying debri

Demon Lightning- (S-Rank) It's a fusion with lightning and the users blood. It gives the lightning a blood color when it protrudes from the users arm. It takes on an existance of its own through the fusion with the blood. It can attack and protect simular to Gaara's sand. It feeds on the users chakra. Though if it hits a jutsu or opponent, it'll take their chakra.

Clone Of The Demon- (A-Rank) This is a cloning jutsu developed by Inatzu that uses his Demon Lightning to create human copies made of Demon Lightning. Though they are human shaped, they act only on instinct mostly. They can only communicate to a fellow Demon Lightning user thus speech is a way to see through their disquise. Also, being made from Demon Lightning gives the clones free use of it to assist the true user. Though, these clones are nothing but bad news to opponents. Because they are made out of Demon Lightning, Physical attacks will prove absolutely useless. They can instantly explode or create more protruding strands of Demon Lightning on their body. A fearful opponent to be sure. (Also has an undying hunger for blood.)

Lightning Seal
A-Rank
Taijutsu/Ninjutsu
Using the power of lightning techniques, the user forces a large amount of lightning into their enemy by a physical attack. This causes the enemies chakra to be corrupt with powerful lightning. This in turn causes an overload of the enemies chakra making jutsus other then the lightning element impossible to use. If jutsus of the other elements are attempted, this causes the seals full power to be released. The enemies chakra begins to rage out of control damging the enemies chakra network. Any attempt to use any elemental jutsu other then lightning over the ranking class B, results in such damage that the enemy will die do to the extreme damage.

Kenjutsu:

Charging Moonlight Dragon- (D-Rank) This is a tech where I release a burst of Lightning from my sword that takes the form of a dragon. It then moves in responce to my sword. It only lasts till it hits something solid.

Wind Jutsu:

Gale of the Mystics
A-Rank
Ninjutsu
The user of this jutsu conjures the Mystics power in the form of the Wind. The user performs a quick line of hand signs then throws their arms in the direction of their target. The air around them suddenly gets really dense. This can also be used as a temperary defense. The dense air slows the speed of oncoming weapons and jutsus that can then be repeled when the dense air thrusts out from around the user to take the form of several grand sized tornados. The wind around these tornados are so dense they are as solid and strong as steel.

Howl! Wind of Ages
S-Rank
Ninjutsu
This jutsu is one that takes time to fully master. This takes a long series of handsigns to perform. But once finished with the hand signs, the user releases a massive amount of chakra into the air. The air then blasts off to attack the target similar to the Wind Blade technique. But something different in this technique. For even if the target isn't struck by the dangerous tendrels of the wind, if the wind got within a foot of it's target, the secondary effect starts. The secondary effect is that the target/targets are surrounded by an extremely dense area pressure. The sudden change causes their body to sufficate within seconds. This attack can be instantly picked out from being Wind Blade by its unique howling noise the wind makes when the attack is issued (It sounds almost metalic). The draw back to this technique is that after it is used, if the enemy survives, the dense air pressure within the area cause further wind jutsus to be less efficient. Slower as well. Any wind technique below that of A-Rank has a good chance of not even being able to work at all when performed.

Wind of Torment
S-Rank
Ninjutsu
This jutsu is close to being forbidden. It requires at least some knowledge of the human anatomy or the anatomy of the target/targets. The user uses the air around the enemy to invade the enemies body. The air fills the lungs and open cavities within the body with the dense air. It's painful but lasts very shortly as the air finally fills the enemy up too much and the open cavities and lungs burst/rupture. This causes instant death if the enemy doesn't flee the ten foot radius within their next post, as the rupturing also damages other organs as well. The jutsu takes time to prepare because the air has to densify within the body. Also, in order to use this jutsu, the user must be within 10 feet of the target/targets. The draw back to this powerful jutsu is the need for massive concentration. After using this jutsu, the user chakra is unstable causing the inability to perform body based jutsus for two posts. This is caused by the user having to outstretch his chakra from his body in order to perform this jutsu.

Village Jutsus:

Demon Mist
S-Rank
Ninjutsu
This mist takes on a dark purplish-black color and is also thicker than normal mist. Almost entirely unmoveable, wind and other attempts to blow or move it have no effect. Those who attempt to pass through it seem to be dissolved within the mist itself before they reach the other side. Its dense form makes it impossible to move faster than a walk while within it. Some who have seen and heard of this great defense have thought it to be a true display of the villages demonic soul. It can also be munipulated when fully mastered so as to move and form shapes. This form of use can be used to trap opponents and make a more effective defense. It consumes a lot of chakra for its creation, and the user must be trained in chakra points and full bodily release of chakra in order to use.

Subject: Re: Inatzu ~God Of Lightning~ Thu Oct 22, 2009 6:07 pm

No acid rain, need to be from Ame-Sora, or Sora-Ame, whatever the hell it's called. Explain how Lightning can rip a hole through time, and Space? That seems more like a Time & Space technique to me..only that incorporated the Lightning Element to it.

The rest approved, unless said so by another admin/moderator.

EDIT: How can the Elemental Absorbing Lightning Work? It doesn't make much sense. Explain.

Subject: Re: Inatzu ~God Of Lightning~ Fri Oct 23, 2009 2:10 pm

I removed Acid Rain even though it was an approved village jutsu from my previous village, and added some more information to Rip Charge in hopes to help you better understand how it works and it effects.

If you still find a problem with the jutsu, I would like to talk aboutit more and if it comes to it, I will remove it if there are too many problems.

As or Counter Charge, I went through and decidedto edit it some. I think you'll find it more agreeable and capable.

Again, I'm willing to work with the admins in any way to make the staff more comfortable with my character. Please let me know of any more situations.

Subject: Re: Inatzu ~God Of Lightning~ Mon Nov 02, 2009 6:10 pm

Added Denkousochi

Guest

Well tai, pretty much covered everything...and Sora-Ame...but I'll just say keep it Ame *sigh*

I too had issues withe rip in fabric and making another dimensions of storms, but well I can see you've been changing them more and more (so that its explainable). Try so with me and Tai's approvals go get one more mods approval.

Subject: Re: Inatzu ~God Of Lightning~ Tue Nov 03, 2009 3:42 am

The last two jutsus you know Wind of Torment and Howl something well they need some limits set to you other than the preparation for the second one you need to add a con to yourself, it's not necessary recoil or anything but jutsus with those magnitutude ALWAYS have cons to the user. You know with great power comes great responsibility xD Fix that and I may approve.
Love the song! ^^

Subject: Re: Inatzu ~God Of Lightning~ Tue Nov 03, 2009 2:01 pm

I think I fixed what you wanted. Let me know if it still needs work.

And thanks. I thought it was appropriate. ^^

Subject: Re: Inatzu ~God Of Lightning~ Tue Nov 03, 2009 2:23 pm

Seems good enough if anyone else has some complains post other than that
Inatzu ~God Of Lightning~ Chuck-norris-approved

Subject: Re: Inatzu ~God Of Lightning~ Mon Nov 16, 2009 4:20 pm

Changed my village and added the first of the village jutsus. (Demon Mist)

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